I thought it went on a little long at the beginning. We got it early on that she was a ditz and he was an asshole. Both characters felt like stereotypes maybe because we were hit over the head with their characteristics. The acting was more believable once we got into the action a little more than half-way through.
If you're looking for advice, mine would be to cut out much of the beginning and get right to the meat.
Not bad... alot of it kinda seemed like a short film version of 'Seven Pounds' based in Hollywood. Some shots were great, some were sketchy and some seemed out of focus. It was just missing something for me..
I thought it went on a little long at the beginning. We got it early on that she was a ditz and he was an asshole. Both characters felt like stereotypes maybe because we were hit over the head with their characteristics. The acting was more believable once we got into the action a little more than half-way through.
If you're looking for advice, mine would be to cut out much of the beginning and get right to the meat.
Loved the karmic guy.
Nice effort!